Allright I guess.
There is some decent animation but you need to make it longer. Just try harder with the next one.
I tried using an awkward nested-armature thing to animate the people
and grew sick of it towards the end.
I didn't BLAME it.
I didn't blame it, but I did give it a zero. Here are some suggestions so I don't BLAME the next one you make.
1. More dialogue
2. Keep the dialogue inside the frame so it can be read.
3. better story/ longer story
4. Sound effects
5. Longer length
6. Any substantial animation
Remove the last two words form the title of this flash and you'll find my description of it.
I like the animation and overall style. Looking forward to seeing more like this.
The voice annoyed me but it was still an alright flash. Just try and add more stuff next time.
I enjoyed it.
You are very good in my opinion, and i hope to see more. I especially enjoyed the voices.
hmm well it was ok
the animation was alright and the drawings was goodish but i dont realy like that style cartoon lik ethe japaneesish style i think sux.... in flash the song wasnt so good either... i didnt understand it.. lolz welll it waz good over all. bye
lol that was great... and your explination makes itn sound like it woukld not be funny at all
happy clockday! ^.^ :p :D yae
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